More emphasis on the comedy side of things required. Yes it is an action film but it's all done very satirically.
Diegetic sound needs more attention, you may want to change the ordering as discussed, be clear why you're including other texts, check spelling (always) and get more images in to support.
More emphasis on the comedy side of things required. Yes it is an action film but it's all done very satirically.
ReplyDeleteDiegetic sound needs more attention, you may want to change the ordering as discussed, be clear why you're including other texts, check spelling (always) and get more images in to support.
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