Remember it’s film OPENINGS you’re talking about. Too often you just say ‘in films’, so address that.Check spelling and grammar, few errors.Film Title – yes, but your examples are of DVD boxes. I need examples taken from actual film openings (so screen shots basically)Key cast names – no examples from film openings (I need to see real examples for all points)For top marks I need at least 2 examples for each point (you mostly use 1)End with a conclusive list of film opening conventions B/C
Remember it’s film OPENINGS you’re talking about. Too often you just say ‘in films’, so address that.
ReplyDeleteCheck spelling and grammar, few errors.
Film Title – yes, but your examples are of DVD boxes. I need examples taken from actual film openings (so screen shots basically)
Key cast names – no examples from film openings (I need to see real examples for all points)
For top marks I need at least 2 examples for each point (you mostly use 1)
End with a conclusive list of film opening conventions
B/C